This is the final presentation board of my Year 5 Semester 1 ARC4002 studio.

 

31-12-2015, Below are the comments from the panels:
Ar. MS:

CONCLUSION AND SUGGESTION

1. Not excited, not innovating, ...... 50%
Action:

1. Tie my studies on the interesting form and exciting office environment into my own project, after creating the basic space planning and requirement without aesthetic consideration.
 

Ar. SI:
ISSUE & PROGRAMMING

1. Issue statement

2. Interview

3. Design Objective

4. Need vs Challenges

DESIGN STRATEGIES

1."Journey" good statement but not well presented

SPATIAL DELIGHT

1. Response to IRIS

DESIGN EXCELLENCE

1. Site slopping

2. Site section/ Profile

PROGRESS AND PRESENTATION CLARITY

1. Zoning/Programming

CONCLUSION AND SUGGESTION

1. Issue Statement is missing

2. Relook at design solution

3. Good study and conclusion on precedent

4. Contextual study and response is ok.

Action:

1. To go through the comments one by one.

 

This section will continues with studio coordinators and supervisors' comment for Year 5 Semester 2 ARC4003 studio.